Dec 3, 2009

Oh, This Bittersweet Life - Quote

I found this on Kenna's Blog - Oh, This Bittersweet Life. Awesome. Go check her out. She's very original and true to herself. I love how she writes from the heart. And of course... writes words that I cannot I just had to share coz it's so true.

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I discovered this quote today:
"Wait for the boy who pursues you.
Wait for the one who will make an ordinary moment seem magical.
Wait for the kind of person who brings out the best in you,
and makes you want to be a better person.
Wait for the person who will be your best friend.
Wait for the person who will drop everything to be with you
no matter what the circumstances.
Wait for the person who makes you smile like nobody else.
Wait for the person who wants to show you off to the world
when you are in sweats and a tee shirt.
And most of all...
wait for the person who will put you at the center of their universe.
Because that is exactly where you belong."


As sweet as this quote may be... I have to
disagree with it.
Because lets face it you guys, we are priceless.
And frankly, I think we deserve a lot more than that.
So with that being said,
(and hoping the author of this quote doesn't mind),
I made a few revisions of my own.


"Wait for the boy who not only pursues you… but wait for the boy who chases you like crazy. Wait for the boy who chases you until he can't possibly chase you anymore. Wait for the boy who does everything he possibly can to make sure you're his and he's yours, and refuses to ever let go or give up on that dream. Wait for the one who will not only make an ordinary moment seem magical but wait for the one who makes sure there are no ordinary moments. Wait for the one who makes every moment magic. Wait for the kind of person who not only brings out the best in you and makes you want to be a better person, but wait for the kind of person who refuses to let you be anything less than the best you could possibly ever be. Wait for the kind of person who doesn't let you settle for anything less for yourself, because they care too much about you. Wait for the kind of person who sets you straight when you aren't being the best you can be, and who makes you work harder every single day at getting there. Wait not only for the person who will be your best friend, but wait for the person who goes out of their way to be the best friend you have ever had, and ever will have. Wait for the person who will not only drop everything to be with you no matter what the circumstances, but wait for the person who tries to drop everything to be with you, no matter what the circumstances. Not becuase it's the sweet thing to do, but simply because they want to. Wait for the person who not only makes you smile like nobody else... but wait for the person who does it on purpose. Wait for the person who is willing to fight for anything to see your smile. Wait for the person who lives for your smile. Wait for the person who not only wants to show you off to the world when you are in sweats and a tee shirt… but wait for the person who thinks you are most beautiful in just your sweats and a tee shirt. Wait for the person who tells you that you don't need to wear anything but sweats and a tee shirt, and wait for the person who makes sure that you feel the most beautiful in just sweats and a tee shirt. And most of all… wait not only for the person who will put you up at the center of their universe… but wait for the person who wouldn't settle for making you only the center of their universe. Wait for the person who makes you their entire universe. Because not only is the center of the universe exactly where you belong, but the universe is exactly what you are."

5 comments:

Daffy said...

Well adapted...your love light shines brightly :O)

Hugs

Andhari said...

our version so much better. *tears*

kys said...

Good version!

Raj said...

that was awesome maryx. adding fuel to the fire huh?

loved all your additions as well as the shorter one.

gotta read that blog sometime too.
:)

Daffy said...

Hey sweets...tomorrow is an awards post at my place...there is one for you if you have time to stop by!